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		<title>Comment on First line quiz by Chris Redding by Scott Skrivanek</title>
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		<dc:creator>Scott Skrivanek</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Oct 2009 01:39:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>But I still want my chocolate when I get back!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>But I still want my chocolate when I get back!!</p>
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		<title>Comment on First line quiz by Chris Redding by Chris Redding</title>
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		<dc:creator>Chris Redding</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Oct 2009 01:26:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Scott, dear. you couldn't possibly be as  dumb as you act.   :oops:</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Scott, dear. you couldn&#8217;t possibly be as  dumb as you act.   <img src='http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_redface.gif' alt=':oops:' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<title>Comment on First line quiz by Chris Redding by Scott Skrivanek</title>
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		<dc:creator>Scott Skrivanek</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 20:58:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>#1 Great Expectations - Charles Dickens
#2 Pride and Prejudice - Jane Austen
#3 To Kill a Mockingbird - Harper Lee
#4 Clockwork Orange - Anthony Burgess
#5 Brave New World - Ardous Huxley
       - Central London Hatchery
#6 Rabitt, Run Study Guide - John Updike
#7 The Lovely Bones - Alice Seabold
#8 Outlander - Diane Gabalander
#9 Sanctuary - Nora Roberts
#10 Corpse Whisperer - Chris Redding
           - Good thing I bought your book at  
              the fair last week!!

Your boss isn't as dumb as he acts!!  I expect a bag of chocolate (sugar free) on my desk when I come back to work next week!!!!   :razz:</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>#1 Great Expectations - Charles Dickens<br />
#2 Pride and Prejudice - Jane Austen<br />
#3 To Kill a Mockingbird - Harper Lee<br />
#4 Clockwork Orange - Anthony Burgess<br />
#5 Brave New World - Ardous Huxley<br />
       - Central London Hatchery<br />
#6 Rabitt, Run Study Guide - John Updike<br />
#7 The Lovely Bones - Alice Seabold<br />
#8 Outlander - Diane Gabalander<br />
#9 Sanctuary - Nora Roberts<br />
#10 Corpse Whisperer - Chris Redding<br />
           - Good thing I bought your book at<br />
              the fair last week!!</p>
<p>Your boss isn&#8217;t as dumb as he acts!!  I expect a bag of chocolate (sugar free) on my desk when I come back to work next week!!!!   <img src='http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':razz:' class='wp-smiley' /></p>
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		<title>Comment on First line quiz by Chris Redding by KM Fawcett</title>
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		<dc:creator>KM Fawcett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 13:46:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Why do I keep getting a smiley face in stead of the #8?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why do I keep getting a smiley face in stead of the #8?</p>
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		<title>Comment on First line quiz by Chris Redding by KM Fawcett</title>
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		<dc:creator>KM Fawcett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 13:45:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Something happened and it published before I was done.  That should be 
8) Outlander and 10) Corpse Whisperer.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Something happened and it published before I was done.  That should be<br />
 <img src='http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif' alt='8)' class='wp-smiley' /> Outlander and 10) Corpse Whisperer.</p>
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		<title>Comment on First line quiz by Chris Redding by KM Fawcett</title>
		<link>http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/2009/10/09/first-line-quiz-by-chris-redding/#comment-276</link>
		<dc:creator>KM Fawcett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Oct 2009 13:44:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I'll Play.  Though I don't know them all.

1)  Great Expectations (It's the only book I know with a character named Pip)
2) Pride and Prejudice
3) To Kill a Mockingbird
7) The Lovely Bones
8) Outlander (My all time favorite novel - except I believe it reads "It WASN'T a very likely place..."
9) Corpse Whisperer</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ll Play.  Though I don&#8217;t know them all.</p>
<p>1)  Great Expectations (It&#8217;s the only book I know with a character named Pip)<br />
2) Pride and Prejudice<br />
3) To Kill a Mockingbird<br />
7) The Lovely Bones<br />
 <img src='http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_cool.gif' alt='8)' class='wp-smiley' /> Outlander (My all time favorite novel - except I believe it reads &#8220;It WASN&#8217;T a very likely place&#8230;&#8221;<br />
9) Corpse Whisperer</p>
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		<title>Comment on Importance of Critique Groups By J. Hali Steele by J. Hali Steele</title>
		<link>http://www.libertystatesfictionwriters.com/2009/08/07/importance-of-critique-groups-by-j-hali-steele/#comment-274</link>
		<dc:creator>J. Hali Steele</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 01:11:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Bron, I've had the joy of reading some really great stories myself with you guys.
Enjoy RWAUS and let me know how it goes.

Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Bron, I&#8217;ve had the joy of reading some really great stories myself with you guys.<br />
Enjoy RWAUS and let me know how it goes.</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Importance of Critique Groups By J. Hali Steele by Bronwyn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bronwyn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Aug 2009 00:13:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I love you too J!! I can't tell you how much you've all helped me and I love the range of stories we have coming from all directions! I don't know what I'd do without the encouragement from a great bunch of gals =)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I love you too J!! I can&#8217;t tell you how much you&#8217;ve all helped me and I love the range of stories we have coming from all directions! I don&#8217;t know what I&#8217;d do without the encouragement from a great bunch of gals =)</p>
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		<title>Comment on Importance of Critique Groups By J. Hali Steele by J. Hali Steele</title>
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		<dc:creator>J. Hali Steele</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Aug 2009 17:02:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Tarnya. I agree, it must have been lonely. And what if your crit partner didn't live nearby - it could be very expensive. If you're me anyway LOL. I'd be dashing around the country trying to find them for help with a scene.

How was Florence? And did your laptop arrive in Rome?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Tarnya. I agree, it must have been lonely. And what if your crit partner didn&#8217;t live nearby - it could be very expensive. If you&#8217;re me anyway LOL. I&#8217;d be dashing around the country trying to find them for help with a scene.</p>
<p>How was Florence? And did your laptop arrive in Rome?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Importance of Critique Groups By J. Hali Steele by Tarnya</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tarnya</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Aug 2009 01:32:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I couldn't agree more. As a new writer, I don't think I could have honed my skills as quickly if I wasn't in a crit group. While it's fantastic when someone crits your work (regardless of reaction - it gets you thinking), the main power is from reading other wip. That's the powerful part. I've learnt so much from reading other wip's. Much more so than simply reading published books.
How on earth did authors ever cope before the internet? I can't fathom how lonely it would be without my group of critters.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I couldn&#8217;t agree more. As a new writer, I don&#8217;t think I could have honed my skills as quickly if I wasn&#8217;t in a crit group. While it&#8217;s fantastic when someone crits your work (regardless of reaction - it gets you thinking), the main power is from reading other wip. That&#8217;s the powerful part. I&#8217;ve learnt so much from reading other wip&#8217;s. Much more so than simply reading published books.<br />
How on earth did authors ever cope before the internet? I can&#8217;t fathom how lonely it would be without my group of critters.</p>
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