Write Tight

WRITE TIGHT About the Author
A Writer’s Guide to Needless Words,
Boring Words, Bland Words, Useless Words, and
Overused Words to Avoid or Use Sparingly

feel/felt

it

watched

which

saw

words ending in “ly”

heard

had

rather

when

very

now

little

know

just

really

pretty

almost

somewhat

there

perhaps

struggling

uncomfortable

silence

this/these

even

that/those

warm/warmth

exactly

finally

now

nearly

obviously

seems

somehow

somewhat

then

turn

grin

nod

smirk

scowl

sigh

laugh

painfully

started to

cynical

began to

carefully

very

snort

about

honestly

actually

flinch

almost

start

almost like

realize

already

shrug

appears

smile

approximately

practically

basically

sort

close to

sort of

eventually

thing

suddenly

here

just

kind of

just then

simply

gaze

somewhat like

look

truly

utterly

shook

trembled

grimace

sneer

chuckle

chortle

Lois Winston

Award-winning author Lois Winston writes humorous, cross-genre, contemporary novels and romantic suspense. She often draws upon her extensive experience as an artist and crafts designer for much of her source material.Her first book, TALK GERTIE TO ME, was the recipient of the Readers and Bookbuyers Best Award, took second place in both the Beacon Awards and Laurel Wreath Awards, and was nominated for a Reviewers’ Choice Award and a Golden Leaf Award.

Her second novel, LOVE, LIES & A DOUBLE SHOT OF DECEPTION, was the winner of the Winter Rose Award for Excellence in Romantic Fiction, the More Than Magic Award, and the Laurie Award. The book also garnered Golden Leaf, Golden Quill, and Beacon nominations. Lois also contributed to several anthologies: DREAMS & DESIRES, VOL. 1, 2, and 3 and HOUSE UNAUTHORIZED.

When not writing or designing, you can find Lois trudging through stacks of manuscripts as she hunts for diamonds in the slush piles for the Ashley Grayson Literary Agency. Visit Lois at www.loiswinston.com.
LOVE, LIES AND A DOUBLE SHOT OF DECEPTION